Elevator Pitch No. 3
The below is the link for my elevator pitch,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfoOX84DY0E
I received some very sweet comments, but no constructive feedback, so I simply continued with the same draft and recitation of my last two elevator pitches.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SfoOX84DY0E
I received some very sweet comments, but no constructive feedback, so I simply continued with the same draft and recitation of my last two elevator pitches.
Hi!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch. I liked your delivery and presentation of it a lot. This is the first time I've seen it, and I will say the only constructive thing I have to say is the beginning of it confused me a little. Once you started explaining your idea and your product, I loved the idea you were presenting and you were very clear and direct about it. I wasn't sure how the beginning tied into it and it confused me in the moment but I might've just misunderstood.
Linnea